Woo Hoo! I was so impressed with Ella's story. I love the describing words she uses and the way her story is like a cycle.
More Food Chain stories can be seen in the Writing Folder.
We are Hungry!
On a winter morning a little sprout popped out of the frosty, white grass.
Over a couple of weeks the little sprout grew bigger, straighter and stronger,
Then…
a little, tiny, hungry caterpillar wriggled along and started to
nibble one piece and then the next piece of the plant. Soon not a single leaf was left.
Suddenly…
Swoop!
A mother magpie dived down and gobbled the little hungry
caterpillar. Then she went back to her nest.
Later a fox came along and spied the mother magpie
looking for worms in the deep green grass. He pounced and grabbed the magpie and tore it to pieces. But sadly he got a bone stuck in his throat and he couldn't breathe, he slowly died.
Some bugs and worms started eating the fox and he turned into lovely soil.
Ella
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