Thursday 21 August 2014

A Woo Hoo Story

We are all so proud of the story Jamie wrote independently today. He has been working on writing stories that are interesting and longer. Keep up the great work Jamie!

One day a daddy lion went out hunting for the mum. He saw a stripy zebra. He crept up to the zebra. Next...
Pounce, he jumped on the zebra but he missed. Then he turned around and at the back of him was the zebra.
Then the chase began!
Through the wheat, swish, swish, swish.
Through the water splish, splosh, splish, splosh.
Through the mud, slurp, slurp, slurp.
Next the lion pounced onto the zebra, this time he didn't miss. Then he took it back to his home and they ate it up.
The end
By Jamie

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